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Am i the only one who thinks the twilight series focus too much on edward/bella?
i mean the author writes about how perfect edward is or how edward and bella make out like every 2 seconds. it seriously gets annoying. it seems like they have no life, espoecially edward. okay they r in love i get it. now move on! also she ditches her friends for him. i would never do that to my friends.
shut the **** up skribbles. i know what im talking about. and i mean it focuses too much on their romance! their should be less romance more action! now do u ppl understand??
and fat mouse who said im focusing too much on them! in fact i stopped reading them cuz of this. ur a moron!
i know they r the main characters duh
I agree with you. I may be a guy and all, but before anyone pulls that card out against me, I do write romance so I have some idea what I'm talking about.
The way I look at things, romance can be categorized into two categories: short stories consisting of only a few chapters and long novels. When it comes to shorter stories, it is kinda necessary to focus on the romance, since you only have a short amount of time to get that point to the reader and influence them. There can be tiny outside plots, but they need not to be important or else they will completely overshadow the whole point of the story.
Meanwhile, when it comes to a novel length romance, I find that the best stories usually have an external conflict that, on the surface, doesn't truly comply with the romantic relationship, but does have an influence on what happens. In this type of story, you need not to overwhelm the reader with the relationship.
From what I've seen, Meyer takes strategies from the former type of story and applies it to the latter. She overdoes the romance between the two characters rather than focusing on any plot outside of them. All the conflicts are very shallow and not very well written, which takes away from the potential that the story has.
Really, I find it a romance that does not live up to its potential.
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